With the game's early access status considered, besides bugs and its lack of fine tuning and polishing that are to be expected, this is my critique:

In game events poorly narrated and performed. It is as if the events are narrated and performed by an oblivious teenager. Now, a game narrated by a teenager should not be a problem if it is a different game with a more lighthearted content.

But this is a zombie survival game. The narration in this game lacks seriousness and immersion that I cant help but think that the main narrator (the camp commander) for example, lacks assertiveness, sounds extremely unattentive, and oblivious.

I am seriously expecting someone more profound and immersed. Something that is to be expected of a person that is chosen to be a commander of a group of survivors during an existential crisis which is the theme of this game.

TL DR: Storyline and storytelling is lacking

P.S: Expecting great future updates

With the game's early access status considered, besides bugs and its lack of fine tuning and polishing that are to be expected, this is my critique: In game events poorly narrated and performed. It is as if the events are narrated and performed by an oblivious teenager. Now, a game narrated by a teenager should not be a problem if it is a different game with a more lighthearted content. But this is a zombie survival game. The narration in this game lacks seriousness and immersion that I cant help but think that the main narrator (the camp commander) for example, lacks assertiveness, sounds extremely unattentive, and oblivious. I am seriously expecting someone more profound and immersed. Something that is to be expected of a person that is chosen to be a commander of a group of survivors during an existential crisis which is the theme of this game. TL DR: Storyline and storytelling is lacking P.S: Expecting great future updates