i want to start off by saying that i love the theme and the characters, and i'm recommending this as a short and sweet VN that i'm sure most people will enjoy! however, i personally feel that the execution of the story and the choices were handled poorly. i wound up having to find a guide online to see all the endings because the choices were so jumbled and it was difficult to remember which combination i'd already tried.


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i was also disappointed by the "forever" ending, it felt very rushed. i think the story up until that point could've been longer, to give the player time to get to know the two love interests a bit better, and perhaps squeeze in more interactions between elias and taylor. it would've helped make the polycule ending make more sense and not feel like it was an afterthought.
i also feel that it would've been better to make the wedding preparations non-consequential, rather than the deciding factor to which ending you wind up with. the confrontation at the end would've been the best place to put in the final choice for the player to make, so they can get the ending /they/ want without so much fuss, but i digress.

all in all, this was an enjoyable game! if you like cute, flustered boys then i'm sure you'll like this VN. i complained about having to find a guide but the creator /does/ already have one available, and it wasn't complicated after that, i just feel that it could've been made a bit more straightforward

i want to start off by saying that i love the theme and the characters, and i'm recommending this as a short and sweet VN that i'm sure most people will enjoy! however, i personally feel that the execution of the story and the choices were handled poorly. i wound up having to find a guide online to see all the endings because the choices were so jumbled and it was difficult to remember which combination i'd already tried. (SPOILERS) i was also disappointed by the "forever" ending, it felt very rushed. i think the story up until that point could've been longer, to give the player time to get to know the two love interests a bit better, and perhaps squeeze in more interactions between elias and taylor. it would've helped make the polycule ending make more sense and not feel like it was an afterthought. i also feel that it would've been better to make the wedding preparations non-consequential, rather than the deciding factor to which ending you wind up with. the confrontation at the end would've been the best place to put in the final choice for the player to make, so they can get the ending /they/ want without so much fuss, but i digress. all in all, this was an enjoyable game! if you like cute, flustered boys then i'm sure you'll like this VN. i complained about having to find a guide but the creator /does/ already have one available, and it wasn't complicated after that, i just feel that it could've been made a bit more straightforward