绘画和音乐不错，如果能加入“画廊”就更好了，比如可以允许玩家在打出一个结局后进入画廊欣赏解锁过的绘画和音乐。类似的游戏《饿殍：明末千里行》就是这样整体呈现游戏内的美工的，感觉可以借鉴。...

It isn't good enough in its current state (the demo). There are lots of misused words, grammar issues, and trying to be unnecessarily wordy rather than concise. It is difficult to read and to comprehend smoothly, for a visual novel sort of game, the standards needs to be higher....

Thanks

Please consider adding Russian language! Thank you

小游戏也太无聊了