It was a nice demo, pretty lengthy as well! I do have some...issues (?)...like how she goes upstairs to her "magical room"...maybe you can add a screen of her getting back home to show the actual house. I thought she'd live in an apartment building, not a house, so that might help a bit setting the scene. Also, maybe show her inside the circle as she does the ritual, to emphasize the fact that only she's getting teleported, since the visuals seem to indicate that she's outside the circle....

it wasn't to bad,, I Hope that she Gets Yasau (sp ?) back to her time so they can be together :D

it wasn't to bad,, I Hope that she Gets Yasau (sp ?) back to her time so they can be together :D