"i made this about 1 year ago.. looking at this now it looks pretty bad to me, and also i have gone over to some animation now so yea" - Pobe

i made this about 1 year ago.. looking at this now it looks pretty bad to me, and also i have gone over to some animation now so yea

This one is definitely not bad but it does need some woerk with the lighting and some camera work there but overall, you're getting used to SFM that I am seeing right now (Apologies if it is a late message). By the way, if you want to make it more stand out or more colourful, In SFM: You have got something called 3 point lightings which is basically 3 lights coming from different sides and Photoshop to add colour correction so it can spark. Overall: You work is decent enough with SFM. Great Job! Keep going bud and you'll get there ;)