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Where Is She? (Part 5) | Transition

And finally, I think you should try to incorporate a few more puzzles in your areas, right now it's just portaling from one platform to the next. And it's a bit of a shame since that means we dont get to stay in each area for very long, so add puzzles to force the player stay and make them appreciate all that hard work you did! :P You dont have to do anything too complex, Just a little portal management puzzle with maybe a fling or two there and there and it will be fine.

Cool map, not bad for your first time! To improve your future maps I'd reccomend you use env_sprite on your lights, it makes them look way better. And be careful not to stretch any overlays while applying them. Oh and remember to add frames to your doors, especially the double sliding one you had behind the boxes, there are models you can use for it. I liked the new aperture junkyard section combo in the latter half of the map, good detailing and decent lighting there. To improve new aperture areas like this try using a few keyframe_ropes for cables, it adds that extra layer of pizzas you know.

Nice one ! Thanks for creating

Nice work!

It looks great.

Too short too easy but excellent job

Just Beautiful.Can't wait to see more

Good hammer job.

glorious

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