Recent reviews by mine

I tried to get into the game and go through not only the main plot, but also the side ones. The main characters are flat, straightforward, you can see from the very beginning how the events will unfold.

What is happening on the screen does not correspond to the narrative, the text describes the middle of a sex scene, but the characters on screen in clothes. Often there is nothing on the screen except the background, so you can understand what is happening only from the text.

The description of events and dialogues are boring, the choice almost does not affect anything, if you guess correctly, you will see a small sex scene, if not - nothing. Scenes short and boring, only the few looks ok.

LGBT+ in the game is reflected by the presence of penises and boobs, and a lot of confusing pronouns. It's a pity that the developer reduced everything to such such trivial things and completely missed the most important.

Overall - I do not recommend, the game is not worth your money or time.

Very nice art style, somewhat interesting characters with a lot of potential for a future story. But the game is very short and a little monotonous towards the end (events can be described in words much more colorful than just *splurt* and *squelch*)

It turned out pretty well for the beginning of the story, but I advise the developer to add some non-linearity, maybe provide some choices as the story progresses. We really need more scenes, even if they are slightly different - the emotions on the faces of the characters or their position, so that the game is more like a continuous story (and yes, I would like to see these *splurt* and *squelch*, and not just read about them). And it is often difficult to understand what the character is saying and what they are thinking (maybe it is worth highlighting text with a color or a different font).

For now, it looks more like a demo than a finished game. I hope someday this can be a great game!

Also, it would be nice to drop Chapter 1 from the title of the game - if there is a further development of the story, chapters can simply be added via DLC, but it will be much easier for us to follow the game in the Steam library.